+ Noir +
May 3rd, 2006, 11:13 PM
Hi!
I want all the concrit I can get; food for thought is yummy. :D So, here it is, my La Pucelle/Disgaea/Makai Kingdom/Rhapsody crossover.
What is the plot? It's planned to be many things, but above all it is growth of the characters, beyond the events of the game. So, indeed....
SPOILER WARNING HERE.
It is set during Demon Overlord Prier's servitude to Laharl.
Aramis, though, he becomes vaguely more unsettling.
+ Ange et Diable + (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2842017/1/)
TARA IS HER OWN WORST CRITIC. =O WHY SHOULD SHE HAVE ALL THE FUN? >D
If you read through it, I would love to hear how I could make you a return reader, or a happier return reader, in the form of a review. Here, or there, or both. X3 I'm certainly not looking for only reviews of praise, much as it makes me squee. I would just love to know what the opinions were on the other 90 percent of hits that left no suggestions.
From my own experience as a browser at FF.Net, seeing a crapload of reviews always rouses my curiosity to peek through a story, if a summary doesn't...and given my taste for obscure games or rare pairs, and my infinite suck at summaries, I need all the help I can get. 8D;
NO CHOCOLATS WOULD BE KILLED IN RAISING OF SAID CURIOSITY. D:
Either way, some of the stuff inquiring minds want to know (in review form, this isn't Tara's Crapfic Meme XD;) :
Requires having played most of the games involved:
- Least liked canon characterization/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- Favorite canon characterization/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- The same above, only OC. I think we have enough running around now...
- Least liked scene/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- Favorite scene/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- Tips on a better summary, as I suck like Hoover at them. :hee:
- ...aaaand anything else you want. :D
Requires no game knowledge, but a willingness to be majorly spoiled ( I wrote that as marjoly spoiled at first, ftw XD; ):
- Jarring/repeat grammatical offenses (and possible solutions; bear in mind the many Culotte narratives are a recurring theme in the game that I'm trying to reflect in AeD. X3)
- Difficulties with the flow of the storytelling (in other words, does Tara ramble on the descriptives too much at times. 8B; -unfs her thesaurus-)
- Any strong points in style I should be sure to maintain?
- Any strong points in style I should add?
- Again, tips on a better summary, as I'm still sucking.
- ...aaaand again, again, anything else you want.
^_^ Hope to see you there! And here. Thanks so much!
I want all the concrit I can get; food for thought is yummy. :D So, here it is, my La Pucelle/Disgaea/Makai Kingdom/Rhapsody crossover.
What is the plot? It's planned to be many things, but above all it is growth of the characters, beyond the events of the game. So, indeed....
SPOILER WARNING HERE.
It is set during Demon Overlord Prier's servitude to Laharl.
Aramis, though, he becomes vaguely more unsettling.
+ Ange et Diable + (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2842017/1/)
TARA IS HER OWN WORST CRITIC. =O WHY SHOULD SHE HAVE ALL THE FUN? >D
If you read through it, I would love to hear how I could make you a return reader, or a happier return reader, in the form of a review. Here, or there, or both. X3 I'm certainly not looking for only reviews of praise, much as it makes me squee. I would just love to know what the opinions were on the other 90 percent of hits that left no suggestions.
From my own experience as a browser at FF.Net, seeing a crapload of reviews always rouses my curiosity to peek through a story, if a summary doesn't...and given my taste for obscure games or rare pairs, and my infinite suck at summaries, I need all the help I can get. 8D;
NO CHOCOLATS WOULD BE KILLED IN RAISING OF SAID CURIOSITY. D:
Either way, some of the stuff inquiring minds want to know (in review form, this isn't Tara's Crapfic Meme XD;) :
Requires having played most of the games involved:
- Least liked canon characterization/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- Favorite canon characterization/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- The same above, only OC. I think we have enough running around now...
- Least liked scene/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- Favorite scene/s and why (and how you think I could make it better)
- Tips on a better summary, as I suck like Hoover at them. :hee:
- ...aaaand anything else you want. :D
Requires no game knowledge, but a willingness to be majorly spoiled ( I wrote that as marjoly spoiled at first, ftw XD; ):
- Jarring/repeat grammatical offenses (and possible solutions; bear in mind the many Culotte narratives are a recurring theme in the game that I'm trying to reflect in AeD. X3)
- Difficulties with the flow of the storytelling (in other words, does Tara ramble on the descriptives too much at times. 8B; -unfs her thesaurus-)
- Any strong points in style I should be sure to maintain?
- Any strong points in style I should add?
- Again, tips on a better summary, as I'm still sucking.
- ...aaaand again, again, anything else you want.
^_^ Hope to see you there! And here. Thanks so much!