Another KH2 Sora o.o

[Jetzudan]

Alrighty... here's another one... this time I actually finished it - in ink!
I didn't use any fancy inking tools... and I have to say that this is my very first time inking by hand.
I've seen some mistakes, but feel free to point out everyone you see. x_X
Oh, and the Keyblade was drawn out of memory... which isn't that good.

Clickity clickclick (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v12/Jetzudan/kh2sr.jpg)

If anyone wants to color it... feel free. ;O

Any comments are appriciated.

[Seraphy]

He's funny looking. That's all I wanna say, cept that a lot of proportions are missing >_>

[Jetzudan]

He's funny looking. That's all I wanna say, cept that a lot of proportions are missing >_>
Funny looking in what way?

[Kanarazu]

As Seraphy said, it's not proportional. Parts of his frame are too big, while others are too small.

[Jetzudan]

As Seraphy said, it's not proportional. Parts of his frame are too big, while others are too small.
Yeah, noticed that. I'll work on that next time, as I can't change this picture.

[Crystal Lizzy]

It looks like Sora is like 20 years old. XD But yeah, other than that the arms are not exactly with the body. The legs are scrawny looking. But for a good thing, you do better at ink than me. A lot better. I say that you should practice more on ink.

[Jetzudan]

It looks like Sora is like 20 years old. XD But yeah, other than that the arms are not exactly with the body. The legs are scrawny looking. But for a good thing, you do better at ink than me. A lot better. I say that you should practice more on ink.Yeah I was going for the older look xD (not good at drawing young people)
Aye... have to agree 'bout the arms and legs, legs haven't been my best side.
I'll go do that. o.o

[Khaos]

Hey, I really like how you made him old, and the details in the pants. Although the only thing wrong I could find were the pants because the arms ALMOST match the body. So keep on, man.

[Dusk]

It's Okay...I think you need to work on as the others have already said, your proportions. The thing that's the most outta whack is his arms...or legs, depending on how you look at it. typically, the length of the arms put together should be the height of the person from shoulder down. So in that picture, the arms should be shorter or the legs longer. One last thing. The neck goes up a little too high. I might be wrong but that seems to be making it seem a bit weird.

[Phoenix]

As the other people said, Sora looks a bit old and out of proportion. His chest looks really skinny compared to his huge, baggy legs.

[Koruto]

I think you should work out in your lines